Feedback From Jo
- why 90 percent overlapping -could be 10% overlap???
- ...why not used percentage sign?
- hard to read the statistic due to no percentage sign..could be made more visible
- text could be different on second one....just british women drink so work as a series??
- double layer indicates becoming another person when you drink???
Peer Feedback No.1
Peer Feedback No.2
Possible Action To Take
- feminine typeface
- use percentage sign
- change pictogram ...to pink flag??
- pink/purple colour scheme
- move text on type only poster
- British colour scheme
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